Saturday, September 13, 2008

BLOG 2 Justinandrews Blue class

thesis:
While direct advertisement in games show off their product well, subtle use of advertisements provides a more entertaining and informative experience.

Outline:
introduction of the topic

paragraph 2
summary of direct ad game

paragraph 3
summary of subtle ad game

paragraph 4
why subtle works better

paragraph 5
closing

1 comment:

BrittanyBlue said...

Your thesis is well written, but it doesn't have much thought put behind it. Your outline also doesn't have much information. The guidlines, however, for your outline seem to put together a well written paper.